Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 12,156 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Spelliing Isn'T Easy.... [correcting A Young Person's Spelling; Spelling Tricks; My Mistake! ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

> It is true that some tasks are easier
> for some people than for others.
> I don't know if spelling is usually easier
> for sisters or for brothers.
> I've spoken English for over sixty years,
> and written it almost as long,
> but still sometimes when i spell words
> they come out.......oh so wrong!
>
> A bright young poet wrote me a poem,
> and she did her best.
> She was brave enough to sit at Ray's,
> unlike all the rest.
> I corrected spelling, but I LIKE her poem,
> and I told her it was so.
> She said she wasn't good at spelling.
> I hope I did not fill her with woe.
>
> Now I've read the poem again. It still
> is good and it even rhymes!
> But even a GREAT poet like ME
> needs help with English sometimes.
> So now I'll try to think of some tricks
> to help her along.
> If i were a great composer (I'm not)
> i could turn this into a song.
>
> SaLmon Lives in oceans, rivers, and Lakes.
> It may sound Like samon, but an L it takes.
> Flavorful only has 2 Ls, though you might think 3.
> It's the same for beautiful, as some flowers can be.
> Yogurt's a tough one. it has NO e, it is trUe.
> When YOU think of YOgUrt, just think of YOU!
>
> More than one banana is BANANAS, not banana's.
> Banana's is a contraction or shows possession.
> And remember the Y and apostrophe in THEY'RE.
> Good luck. Have fun. This is the end of the session.
>
>


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i came out of Ray's Food Place with bananas, frozen yogurt, and salmon. a girl and a woman were sitting out front on the sidewalk (on chairs) at a card table, the girl offering to write for me a free poem. well, it WAS free! what did i have to lose? ? they even gave me a piece of paper when i asked for one, and i wrote a thank you poem for the girl (and the woman, who was promoting a free summer writing workshop for young people) . the poem about my purchases was very nice and read as follows: [i supplied the (sic) , indicating an error, after each mistake]


> Samon (sic) Frozen yogert (sic) banana
>
> Samon (sic) is Flavorfull (sic)
> Frozen yogert (sic) is Sweet
> banana's (sic) are Yummy
> there (sic) all good to eat

but then i did as the poem Spelliing Isn't Easy indicates. did YOU catch MY mistake? ? i really didn't notice it until i had sent it to the workshop teacher! YES, i think we all make mistakes; mine was a TYPO! really.
>

Comments about Spelliing Isn'T Easy.... [correcting A Young Person's Spelling; Spelling Tricks; My Mistake! ] by Bri Edwards

  • Gold Star - 4,883 Points Points Of View (10/20/2014 3:36:00 AM)

    Oh i thought TYPO means thank you po! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,915 Points John Westlake (10/19/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    I did catch your mistake, good to see that you're human also. Nobody can be perfect, ever. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 171 Points Marcus Mckinley (7/22/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    is this your mistake? implying there are 2 L's in beautiful

    Flavorful only has 2 Ls, though you might think 3.
    ] It's the same for beautiful, as some flowers can be.

    a very thoughtful poem for a young poet. great write
    you may like my poem titled patience is a test in pronunciation (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,323 Points Xelam Kan™ (7/9/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    Wow..... that's filled my heart with admiration, how gentle and caring u r....
    A very simple but very loving, indeed it happens especially with ES and those cant follow or doesn't know about the typing rules(like myself)
    Indeed spelling isn't an easy task... but u r a great composer, no doubt of it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 953 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/9/2013 3:34:00 PM)

    Interesting poem with a lively tone and flowing rhymes, I remember 'My Fair Lady' and G.B. Shaw' spelling 'ghoti' for 'fish'. I enjoyed reading it :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 10, 2013


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