Special Friend Poem by Jasmine Vazan

Special Friend

Rating: 4.5


All i ever wanted, was
a friend not just any friend, a special friend.
you were more than a friend to me, you just had to blow it, with a mouthful of lies. since then you've become nothing to me, just another person on my list to ignore. all i ever wanted,
was a friend,
not just any friend, a special friend.
i couldnt trust you, with my words, for you would just tell me off.i couldnt trust you with myself i knew myself, i knew you would hurt it. all i ever wanted, was a friend,
not just any friend a specisl friend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 29 August 2008

This was really, really good jasmine. You use repetition. That is great. You really did a good job with the structure too. I am really impressed. Thank you Jasmine. GW62

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Vanessa Hernandez 12 August 2008

awwww..... dude I know I know. But dude do your capatilzation right. Cause yeah.

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