Speak About Love Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Speak About Love



I shall openly embrace
With smile on face
Arms so wide and open
I shall make it heaven

I shall grant you divine light
To see secrets of delight
You may feel internally
With satisfaction and really

Tell me about your faith
I shall grant no death
You will spread wisdom
The death shall be witnessed seldom

I shall bee your guide
And always provide
The path to lead
And future to read

Speak about love
And you will be at home
With peace in mind
And look very kind

You shall be treated
With fairness and meted
Same treatment sans race
You shall always live with happiness

Wednesday, August 20, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Interesting Jeff Stricklin7 minutes ago interesting Comment +1 .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Speak About Love Michelle Jones4 minutes ago I feel like you let auto correct do too much, there are a few words, I am not sure if you meant them or words very similar in spelling and speaking, but with very different meanings. I like the direction you take with this poem, but feel as though you shy away from bigger words, that may actually help get your message across. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago simple man with simple ideas dear reader..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

Yann Ehj likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

I shall openly embrace With smile on face

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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