Sparrow Poem by sekharan pookkat

Sparrow

Rating: 5.0


A picture in my mind
Not drawn in paper
But curved in my heart
Engraved of memories.

A tall lean girl
With long silky hair
Shining beautiful eyes
Skating through the ice.

Blade of the skate
Turned into high speed
And tuned incredibly
Through the burning melted ice.

Never watched her curves
Ups and downs of muscles
Or marvelous shape
But her miracle escapes.

Diving through the air
Stepping ups
And steeping downs
Sudden ends and starts.

Dribbling in the air
Stopping on the boards
Skating through the ice
And flying like a sparrow.

Pictured in my mind
Not drawn in paper
But curved in my heart
Engraved of memories.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Imaginary skating
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 02 October 2013

Loved the picturesque quality.Your power of imagination is very strong.

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Valsa George 30 September 2013

The image of that beautiful girl on skates is carved in your heart and it keeps enticing you! Let that sparrow perch for ever in your heart's nest and never fly away! ! ! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 May 2015

A sparrow is hard to tame

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Khairul Ahsan 29 September 2013

Borrowing words from poet Lento Maez, may I say, Keep on keeping on'', that means: Keep on imagining and savoring the sweet memory. The title does not appropriately cover the theme or narration of the poem. However, the poem is beautiful and I gave it a 10.

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