Sparks Fly Poem by mona martinez

Sparks Fly

Rating: 5.0


by: leslie and mona

although it won't be long,
until we talk,
it almost feels like foreever,
when we are apart,

you always say the right thing,
no matter if i'm,
happy or sad,
you make my day brighter,

i just thought i let you know,
the way you make me feel,
because everyday gets better and better.

I may not know your face
But I can see your smile
And I can feel your heart
And I can hear your thoughts...

And I love them all... Can't wait till we speak next.

5-11-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 13 May 2009

Lovely romantic piece Mona...you have said it all.....Keep penning the lines 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 14 May 2009

good write...frank and expressive...sparks of love sincere getting rekindled there...10

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Linda Winchell 14 May 2009

Very well penned piece. When I first read the title I thought it might have been some bad sparks that were flying! But then I read it and I see that they are freindship sparks for someone who really cares about what happens to you, even if your eyes have never met. God Be with you! Linda

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C. P. Sharma 13 May 2009

leslie and mona, this is lovely expression of love for someone. CP

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Ency Bearis 13 May 2009

nice passionate verses..with magnetism it can cause sparks that shows attraction to each other..a great concept..well done...10

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Carol Gall 13 May 2009

mona and leslie keep those sparks flying its rare you find one you can relate to 10

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