Space To Breathe Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Space To Breathe

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For one thing, I thank the creator
For giving me lovely place here
To live with peace and honor
Where people make hard struggle and suffer

You should never be ungrateful
For your being successful
In this wonderful world
And keep the flag unfurled

Not all people may be able to write
Express precisely and fight
With opinion so effectively placed
And always remain blessed

It is really natural gift from an almighty
That you are in position to offer variety
In the subjects that deal with human sufferings
And offer some solution to mitigate or bring changes

It is quite understandable
For people
To live with peace and go for easy path
So long they have free space to breathe

Space To Breathe
Thursday, October 8, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2015

It is quite understandable For people To live with peace and go for easy path So long they have free space to breathe

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 October 2015

To live with peace and go for easy path wonderfully written this inspirational poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 October 2015

Verily, we should be grateful to the Aimighty for giving the ability to pen and express.........10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 October 2015

Beautiful poem explaining meaning and purpose of many things in our life. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Jayaraman 08 October 2015

Gratitude and thankfulness for what we have.. somewhere we forget the small things along the way.. thanks for highlighting the importance of these virtues for inner peace to prevail. thanks.

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Savita Tyagi 08 October 2015

True to its each word. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gift of poetry with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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