Space Days Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Space Days

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I am in jovial mood
With free mind and enough of food
I have tested the success
With limited access

That has given me hope
Enough of courage to walk on rope
Once fear is removed from mind
The way is open for all to find

We are called woman and helpless
But we have done it again on their face
We were first to be in space
The world will have to remember it in any case

Those were the primitive space days
Yes the space remained as dream and very far away
The doors since then were opened for further probe
The space was reduced for the people on the globe

We are not helpless creature
Only world have to be made secured
Avenues are to be thrown open for venture
We are promising of success to the world for sure

No target can be fixed yet it can be boundless
It may need honest approach with good chase
We might have come under lots of criticism
The world may look colorful through prism only

We are now seen every where
The contribution is definitely felt somewhere
The education and good environment had made it real
Now some thing more can be realized through proper deal

Girls need open field to compete
Even though the competition is stiff
We can scale and rise in many fields
If some of the positions are actively held

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

I am in jovial mood With free mind and enough of food

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Muzzammil Shah Very encouraging poem that gives us hope and strength to to do something, or to fly in the sky like a free bird. 18 seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Excellent Doina Mican3 hours ago Very good Comment 0 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Faith Hudson3 hours ago good poem Comment 0 nice

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

Girls need open field to compete Even though the competition is stiff We can scale and rise in many fields If some of the positions are actively held ---10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

nice J J2 minutes ago good poem Comment

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