South-Westerly-2 Poem by Indira Renganathan

South-Westerly-2

Rating: 5.0


What ecstasy you've got into
Tumbling home, me and all you do

Frisky sometimes in perfect rhyme
Frowning sometimes in hassling mime

Breeziest breeze but not a gale
Brisk hurling litters all in bale

See, the surging sea..you're roaring
Upping, upping tides overlapping

See, the flying birds..you're pushing
Downing down in your tilting

See, the tottering trees..you're beating
Fluttering leaves in your strewing

See, the slamming doors..you're hitting
Drying clothes far in your tumbling

See, the swirling dust..you're rolling
Up and down all around you're spraying

What ecstasy you've got into
Dusting my eyes you're into

O'naughty Wind, South West Wind
I would say but at the end

Summer solace you are my friend
Soothing mercy o' you abound

O'Monsoon wind, South West Wind
So good, so good..yet dear friend

How would I say still at the end
'Hats off to you' o' naughty wind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 18 July 2009

Summer solace you are my friend Soothing mercy o' you abound ...nice, free flowing poem...liked it...

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Catrina Heart 07 July 2009

Great rhyming couplets written........nature bound and inspiration with the season breeze...soothing piece with your nice poetic pictorial...10+++

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

dear indira....so much nostalgia....you brought bacck cherished memories of childhood amd of the village long gone past....those simple days and innocent forrays... superb ode to the monsoon plethora....the ambiense...the colors and the dynamism in our part of the world...monsoon is it, , that starts the year very nice cheers

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aadi kathu...yes mam it is a solace in summer..the poem rocks with the wind...a lovely write mam

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