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Souris

The day we met wasn't much, just a friendly talk
And while I seemed annoying there you decided not to walk
Away from me you could've been but you chose to stay
And while it wasn't much our lives began that day
Months passed, almost a year before we talked again
You said hi one day and your feelings soon began
As we talked thoughts came, questions began to stir
I think she likes me but do I crush on her
The days went by, you occasionally on my mind
But another girl's heart is what I sought to find
Until that week at camp I stayed within your sight
And it was you I thought about at night
Feelings began to stir as we talked that week
Being in your presence is what I began to seek
Then that night I sat with you upon the dirty floor
And learned that night that you I adore
It came to pass that feelings were revealed
But that didn't mean that our fate then was sealed
My heart still longed for a long held crush
One who still knew me and how to make me blush
But days went by and for you my feelings grew
Soon I found that love for you was all I really knew
It was then I asked if you would be mine
You said yes, things looked like they'd be fine
And indeed they were, our love just seemed to grow
But distance tried to stop us then and our love was hard to show
We realized then that it would be hard to love from far away
But as long as love was there together we would stay
As the months went by my feelings began to change
My love for you took on a bigger, wider range
It wasn't just your heart, I wanted your body too
But since I was too far my words made love to you
I turned you on and got you hot without a single touch
And you did the same and I enjoyed it very much
Despite it all we knew we had to stop
We made to choice to take it from the top
Time went on and soon we hit a rut
I hurt you so that I nearly began to cut
It was then that I learned that I truly needed you
And without you I'd never make it through
The story goes on with joys and trials shared
But we made it through because we truly cared
Needless to say the tale seems very long
But to say it took us over a year would be very wrong
In five quick months you've become the one I need
I love you with all my heart, very much indeed
As time goes by I hope you'll stay with me
I need and love you my beautiful Souris

Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Souris, hopefully this reminds you of where we've been and all we've been through and I hope you'll see that together we can do it all. I love you and I'm looking forward to many more years with you.

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