Sour Words Poem by Chuck Audette

Sour Words

Rating: 4.2


i tried to eat my words
but, shouted, they were hot
saying
i love you
-not

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 09 May 2006

Hot and sour - tasty words indeed! Smiling :) Justine

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Esther Leclerc 20 February 2006

Ha ha, Chuck, I've been there TOO! The words explode from your mouth having a life of their own. I think you're right in saying they feel (or are; both to me) hot, too. Love it!

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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