sekharan pookkat

Soundless Smile - Poem by sekharan pookkat

On Top of the mountain
And the bottom of the sea
There are stones
Spread over the ground.

Foot jerks hardly
On each step
Strikes up and down heavily
In return on peak

A heavy fall
Beneath the sky
With a small bite
Without pain and soundless smile.

Comments about Soundless Smile by sekharan pookkat

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (11/24/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    We struggle in life with rough ground to travel as sometimes we fall beneath our sky holding our dreams as we face bravely with a soundless smile!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (11/16/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    a well written poem enjoyed very much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (11/15/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    oh! you are so good...i am lost for words are brilliant (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 404 Points Charles Jagongo Ogola (11/15/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    'A heavy fall, beneath the sky' I like these words and enjoeyd reading this poem. Excellent. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (11/15/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    I loved the pen-picture very much.A good write! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 14, 2013

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