Soundless Smile Poem by sekharan pookkat

Soundless Smile

Rating: 5.0


On Top of the mountain
And the bottom of the sea
There are stones
Spread over the ground.

Foot jerks hardly
On each step
Strikes up and down heavily
In return on peak

A heavy fall
Beneath the sky
With a small bite
Without pain and soundless smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 24 November 2013

We struggle in life with rough ground to travel as sometimes we fall beneath our sky holding our dreams as we face bravely with a soundless smile! Beautiful write!

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Heather Wilkins 16 November 2013

a well written poem enjoyed very much

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Payal Parande 15 November 2013

oh! you are so good...i am lost for words sir..you are brilliant

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 15 November 2013

'A heavy fall, beneath the sky' I like these words and enjoeyd reading this poem. Excellent. Keep it up.

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Neela Nath Das 15 November 2013

I loved the pen-picture very much.A good write!

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