Sound Of Your Footsteps Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Sound Of Your Footsteps

Rating: 5.0


I hear, I hear intently
the sound of your footsteps
I rush to the door gently
To greet you with peps

My heart is your regal throne
You are my highest need
My celebrations have nubile grown
around you, my sacred meed!

That’s how when the birds tweet
Moving sound of the falling leaves
Heralding your arrival sweet
are clues that my heart believes
Days go by, the nights pass
Your thoughts ….just outpass


************Translated from original Bengali**************

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 17 August 2009

Beautiful celebrations for reunion. CP

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 August 2009

It shows the deep love one has eagerly waiting to hear the footsteps of the beloved one coming closer to the heart.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 August 2009

The enormous desire, the waiting, the patience, and the great joy of seeing the loved one arriving once again....which translate into Love and Happiness, great job, keep it up, you got my 10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 18 August 2009

Nicely penned the feelings..................

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Nomthinjana Lusiti 19 August 2009

I like the way you describe the feeling of the waiting period even better when almost over...nice! !

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Mubeen Sadhika 04 September 2009

That’s how when the birds tweet Moving sound of the falling leaves Heralding your arrival sweet Nice words....beautifully written.....good to read.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

attractive words describe sweet footsteps! nice nice!

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Ency Bearis 01 September 2009

well expressed emotions....nice poem....10

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E DM 24 August 2009

Hi Baswat, yes I agree with the other readers about the feelings expressed, but it seems to me a bit lacking depth and pathos. It sounds to me like a nice lullaby. I do not know the original Bengali poem and therefore cannot judge. Is it meant to be written for children? Enea

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Marvin Brato 23 August 2009

Great write, sir. Enjoyed it!

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