Souls Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Souls

Rating: 5.0


Up apon the steep cliff, a mansion high.
A barren road that runs, near by. In the
back ground, the dark colors of the sky.
Telling the aura, of the castles time. Down
below.. The waves crash and flow.. To the
rhythm of the songs played long ago.. Dancing
on soft, and slow..The shadows of the stories
told..Open our hearts, , hear their souls, , and
feel what they know..

Friday, July 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean,shadows,spiritual,stories,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

..Open our hearts, , hear their souls, , and feel what they know......maxmimum! Liked the setting of the poem, background, imagery and finally the precision. Top score.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A captivating scene has been captured euphoniously. The sunset, oceanic sound, and dance of waves enthral everybody. Beautiful poem I appreciate it.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Kind! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Breathtakingly Moving! ! ! ! ! And Ever So Beautifully Inspirational! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2017

The imagery, the atmosphere you brought here is so nice, when i read halfway i start to imagine with oceanic sound on sunset yellow background to blue night...i like it!

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Soul, For Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poetry Is So Spiritually Beautiful! ! ! ! ! And Inspiring To All! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 21 July 2017

A vivid scene clearly sketched by your words, Rebecca. Where was this?

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2017

Thank You! ! ! Honored By Your Visit And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Sometimes... when listening to music, I close my eyes and visions/dreams/feelings, , different from whats playing..pass by, sometimes outside or reading too. Your Poetry Is So Wonderfully Amazing To Feel...To Read...You Are An Inspiration To All! ! ! ! ! ..The Stars And The Seas! ! ! ! ! :) Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! And Hope You Got To Have A Wonderful... Vacation! ! ! ! ! Not sure I found the same video on Gazzels..But led me to many Heart warming! ! ! ! ! Other ones on Hippo's and their babies! ! ! ! ! Ever So Wondrous! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much Again! ! ! ! !

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