Soul Food- Senryu Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Soul Food- Senryu

Rating: 5.0


Pigeon on the ledge,
Starved, walks away from seeds; needs
Hugs, love therapy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 December 2009

another pigeon piece...this time style japanese...it seems pigions work well, walk well with your poem-seed therapy nice...the pigeon there is symbolic...10

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Ranjit Ravindran 08 December 2009

Nice message ma'am....The whole world is starving for love.

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

One can live only in love without lavishness---truly depicted and i am still a Lavoisier''s oxygen with sleepless nights of Courvoisier brandy to the bonfire within-in cold chilly wintry nights

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 December 2009

without love and all alone appetite we lose.....3 lines which says a lot

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Saadat Tahir 16 December 2009

indeed...all through ages....love has been the in thing... a beautiful composition...and the symbolic impact of doves and pigeons is not lost great lines mamtaji cheers and ten

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Vidi Writes 13 December 2009

Philosophical theme Time and again, such state gleam How long one can put up with routine realm It’s time to move away from basic aim Love therapy can help Soul Search System Good one.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 December 2009

Mamta, You have suggested the much-needed treatment for ailing human society in this beautiful Senryu. I think pigeons are transforming into your soul food and bringing a phenomenal change to your poetic art...10/10. Regards. Naseer

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