Pigeon on the ledge,
Starved, walks away from seeds; needs
Hugs, love therapy.
Nice message ma'am....The whole world is starving for love.
One can live only in love without lavishness---truly depicted and i am still a Lavoisier''s oxygen with sleepless nights of Courvoisier brandy to the bonfire within-in cold chilly wintry nights
without love and all alone appetite we lose.....3 lines which says a lot
indeed...all through ages....love has been the in thing... a beautiful composition...and the symbolic impact of doves and pigeons is not lost great lines mamtaji cheers and ten
Philosophical theme Time and again, such state gleam How long one can put up with routine realm It’s time to move away from basic aim Love therapy can help Soul Search System Good one.
Mamta, You have suggested the much-needed treatment for ailing human society in this beautiful Senryu. I think pigeons are transforming into your soul food and bringing a phenomenal change to your poetic art...10/10. Regards. Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
another pigeon piece...this time style japanese...it seems pigions work well, walk well with your poem-seed therapy nice...the pigeon there is symbolic...10