Soul Feels Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Soul Feels

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Its basic concept abut not the idea new,

May differ in ideas but not to ask for renew,

Press for follow up but not for review,

No need to learn and appear for interview,



Idea inherent and need not teach,

No one should think and go for breach,

Confined to self and can within reach,

Well confined thought but not to preach,



Imposing a will may be termed as autocrat,

Cleverly used in same form by beurocrate,

May also be used with brutality on mob irate,

Condemnable but words may be less to narrate,



Yu may think otherwise and differ,

Solutions many and ideas many to offer,

May continue to rage when see the people suffer,

Perception come in fore to act as buffer,



Many may not reconcile and meekly submit,

May be many lapses and but not to permit,

Will be a crucial factor but not earnestly followed,

Given broad approval but strictly not allowed,



Individuals may differ bit has less weight age,

Opinion may air but find no prominence and footage,

When perception gain support and momentum,

Nothing can stop from moving the pendulum



Rome was not built in a day,

Many perished and were kept at bay,

Path was open but foundation stone was to lay,

Concentration of thoughts and more attention to pay,



When seen logic behind the trusted opinion?

Always takes form in formation of union,

Emerge strong voice from far end of oblivion,

There leaves no way to go back to the pavilion,





It is age old theory and shall remain so,

Will follow strong reaction and torture also,

Leaving half way may turn ship in turtle,

Vigorous follow up may earn the title,





Continue to differ is always healthy sign,

One may offer resistance but finally resign,

It may have definite start and concrete result,

Even if turned the idea down may not find insult,



You will find hardly all may like it,

Light may spread when lamp is lit,

Common good may prevail and nobody is hit,

Recognition finally and no tools there to prohibit,



Such is vast concept should be dealt with aptness,

All views taken into account with firm kindness,

Nothing takes away basis right to differ,

Must have reasonableness and no resistance stiffer,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Karmakar 22 July 2009

Idea inherent and need not teach, No one should think and go for breach, it is always instant...10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 25 July 2009

Many may not reconcile and meekly submit, May be many lapses and but not to permit, many may not reconcile but u have to...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 26 July 2009

Its basic concept abut not the idea new, May differ in ideas but not to ask for renew, it is purely an instinct...10

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Pittle Shaileja 27 July 2009

Its basic concept abut not the idea new, May differ in ideas but not to ask for renew, Press for follow up but not for review, No need to learn and appear for interview, it is basic concept always and not new one...10

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Ratna Patel 02 August 2009

Its basic concept abut not the idea new, very good poem...10

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Kunwar Patel 24 October 2009

Idea inherent and need not teach, No one should think and go for breach, Confined to self and can within reach,

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Suresh Vakil 19 August 2009

it is not new concept....10

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Kant Shri 16 August 2009

poem with nice concept....10

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Chaul Vania 16 August 2009

it is new concept to feel about....10

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Argum Sheth 15 August 2009

it is very good concept....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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