Sorry Poem by tanvi damle

Sorry

Rating: 3.1


Gonna stay in bed for sure today,
cuz of the fight we had yesterday.
I know I'm the one who started this rift,
Which made your spirits away drift.
But i didn't mean to do it,
I'm sorry for every bit.
I swear i won't those things again mention,
& i promise never to your abilities again question.
I know your feeling disgusted,
But I'm really sorry for what i said.
I know you never wanna see my face,
But i assure you things will soon fall into place.
Please do forgive me,
I didn't do it intentionally.
Yeah...you're filled with pain,
But give me one chance to explain....I swear i won't do it again!
You can't stay like this forever,
Please can't we start again all over?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Minns 21 November 2008

wow its diifferent ist asking but not begging i like it

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Tom Golding 22 November 2008

A good write to remember the next time you feel like throwing something

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Andrew Rose 23 November 2008

really good poem, flows well and is a nice break from the repition style. One that stands on its own

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Naidz Ladia 25 December 2008

my gosh...this poem s very nice..the simplest wrd for a very heavy quarrel is 'SORRY'.. sorry with a kiss, sorry with a hug, sorry with an honest promise not to do again, , , , whos heart can stand not to accept that sorry? ths s a true situation to everyone, , ILL SAY, , , , YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON..

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Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

best lines for showin our repentance.............simply superb.....lol made me get nto thoughts of ma childhood days.....te way we keep on pourin our sorrieeessss.......sebastine 10+.........

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Michelle Valdez 24 November 2008

this is a really nice poem................

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Sherif Monem 24 November 2008

very consistent tenor. Great.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 November 2008

be sorry for getting the better of love bargain...a good piece talking sweet and sincere...ten for you Tanvi

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