Sorrow Poem by adam cliff
Sorrow
the tear of sorrow runs down my cheek
friendship is what I seek
I used to think I had it all
but now my backs against the wall
and my heart has been broken
and these words are unspoken
I look back at my past
and wish the sorrow would end my life at last...
Sweet, evocative, touching and succinct - a truly fine piece. Forgive me for suggesting though that you might want to spell/grammar-check? Other than that - keep them coming!
This is strong Adam. I just hope you didn't really mean that last line! You've kept it simple and to the point and I can really see an improvement. Hugs Anna xxx
the sad heart needing release but not in the conclusion of breath but in creation poetry's miracle a fine poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 11:04:52 PM # 1.0.0.1119
well done, beautiful sad poem 10