Sonnet Xii Poem by Sam Peterson

Sonnet Xii

Rating: 2.5


Some, for their lovers, mighty towers build
Tall works of shinning steel and solid stone
Others, still more devoted, shower jewels
Across the breasts, hands and wrists of their loves

Men have walked miles across the burning sands
Or braved the oceans and all her perils
Facing deadly foes and hopeless chances
To see once more the women of their dreams

Artworks of unfathomable beauty
Requiring all the creator’s soul
Fill our fine galleries and museums
In testament of loves long forgotten

The only monument I make for you
Out of poor simple words I roughly hew

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is more general, and something is lost because of that. Still, I like some of the form. I find that so many of my poems to C are too emotional, personal or sexual to display here, or maybe anywhere. There is a fine line between that which works for the world and that which is so personal as to only work for the intended. The closer it gets on the personal end, the more is understood only by a the intended, but the more it works in the world, the more general and pedestrian it becomes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 25 September 2013

love is here with all, good on.

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