Somewhere In Dream Land My Dream Poem by Heather Burns

Somewhere In Dream Land My Dream

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Last night
as I silently
slept
into my dreams
you genlty
crept.

Recalling
times when you
were there
life was breezy
without a care.

Loving you
from the time we
met
walking together
in the sunset.

Knowing your warm
tender embrace
is something time
cannot erase.

Pledging once more
my love to you
when I awoke the
dream was through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 03 June 2011

the language is excellent as you have displayed your feelings in simple manner. i love this poem. keep it up. be simple in expressions as in this one

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Adeline Foster 19 February 2016

Well said and so enjoyable. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Poet Of The River 26 August 2011

you are a very good and inspiring writer. Ash

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Bob Mixson 10 August 2011

Dreams can be such nebulous and fleeting things; don't you wish sometimes you could order up the dream you will have that night? I really like this poem. It makes me remember a time when I was young and could have had a similar dream..thanks for writing it.

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Ken E Hall 24 July 2011

A dream of a dream love and past, it makes the reader want him to be there for you, nice to read...regards

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Jim Troy 20 July 2011

This is the first one of your poems I have had the deep honor and plesant surprise to read. I can see now that I am in for hours of splendid reading. It is easy to see that indeed I have triped over a true artist..... Hope you don't get to ill with my heaping it on.... But this is the truth the I am speaking.... Not the other.. In this short poem you have from the begining stroke painted a most vivid picture...and completed a fine delicate work........ Jim Troy

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