Sometimes In June Poem by Stella Omoregie

Sometimes In June

Rating: 5.0


Last season, it gave me a reason to hope.
Last time it made me wish for you.
Now i wish i didnt respond.
we would have been at stage 0.
Never, will i forget that july i am in and it turn sour every july.
Sometimes in june, we made a pact but now: i dont feel a thing for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ifedayo Oshin 22 August 2011

Time hurts and heals! Is it really about the time or our action? I like this poem for its experience and expression of contrast. well done stella. bella!

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Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 12 August 2011

simple but deep direct but ramified emotional but strong contrast; fine work u'v got there. am not an master but i lov poems. i lik urs. check mine too, i'v got some on facebook too. oh sorry, am louis, nigerian here in nigeria.

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Darlington Chukwunyere 10 August 2011

so witty with wheat-like prowess. Ure such a diamond talent, gud sublimed lines.

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