+ Sometimes Poem by Jordan Legaspi

+ Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes


Sometimes in your life you felt you're alone
A feeling of emptiness and you don't know why
Wake each day the more you are so down
Without reason you can't go on your way

Sometimes you feel like to shout but you can't
Words trapped without passage on its way out
Just to ease the feeling you go on to your usual stuff
With friends hanging around but still vain and rough

Sometimes you want to cry but no tears at all
Looking for an outlet thinking it can help
In releasing the pain or whatever inside so dull
Or maybe the last thing to do yet it won't do

Sometimes you ask many different questions
You might ask 'what happen or what the hell I'm doing'
Perhaps 'who I am- is it a dream or just an illusion'
Maybe 'how could it be or how to tame this feeling'

Sometimes you just smile even it is beyond reality
Wearing the mask but cast the same eyes
Not the face but the soul tortured by vanity
Nay the image of a man but human deep confused

Sometimes you will realize all these are just crosses
Put meaning into it believing it was heaven's plan
A destiny that man can't escape written in his hand
But tend to forget that something is behind

Sometimes you should be alone, to learn how to be a company
Sometimes you should be silent, for you to comprehend the outcry
Sometimes you should ask, for you to learn how to answer
Sometimes because of these you become more human willing to care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelica Ayman 05 July 2009

'sometimes you feel like to shout but you can't' 'words trapped without passage on it's way out' you'r right sometimes you want to say something or to shout like that you say to the others i have lot to say you have to hear me but suddenly you found that you forget what you want to say or you found that no one care so you live alone no one care about you or even try to understand you everyone just care about himself and that what i tried to say in my poem too..... AMAZING! ! 10++++

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Jordan Legaspi

Jordan Legaspi

Davao City, Philippines
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