Sometimes Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet
Sometimes
Sometimes when you are sad You want to cry you want to shout
You want to vanish in an instant Because you're sad it hurts so bad
Sometimes when you feel blue Sadness comes in every hue
You want to cry under the rain So pain won't reign inside your brain
Sometimes when you are torn Problems flash you want to mourn
Comforting songs are never played And so you thought you are betrayed
Sometimes when you are broken The sun won't shine your mood is shaken
The clouds surround the wide horizon A time like this, you feel alone
Oh these times, they come sometimes To pop and appear to break your smiles
When you are happy when you are glad They visit you out they make you mad
Aren't you glad when sadness knocks She isn't wanted she comes and mocks
It means you're great, it means you're strong And In your life nothing is wrong
When you're blue and torn or even broken, faith and smile shouldn't be shaken
You'll find your friends will come out running, In no time they'll come rescuing
So just be you even when you're blue, show your love and smile in every hue
Life is crazy life is fun, It is fine to be sad, torn, and SOMETIMES broken.
The very begginning was alright but it could be improved the rest as you went on got great you really started to get into it. i loved it!
Sometimes we find ourselves trapped in a reflection and emotion could lay low, we were torn but nothing can take human will! ! ! ! Concluded well and this is a poem with spirit. Keep writing, my friend.
Very expressive words and full of strong emotions and feelings.. I really liked the poem.. Keep writing my friend.. Regards, Faith..
'So just be you even when you're blue, show your love and smile in every hue' - it's difficult, but possible with practice.
A lesson for us all to never forget. You are a bringer of wise things no doubt about it. Well written and with passion and great rthym... I like... Jim Troy
Jim Where are you..you don't apear in poemhunter anymore. Where are your poems too that we are crazy about?
Perhaps everything starts in the frame of sometime and ends in sometime....liked the imageries u portrayed here....Subjective and explained with variety.Impeccable
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful haunting and complex. I love your lines and the words you speak. We are all broken at one time or another. It matters what we do about it. You say it so beautifully to be broken and yet its ok. I take it that you say without saying what we do after. Great write 10+