Aria Siren


Something Like Summer - Poem by Aria Siren

Take me

And let me hang

Loose

Dip me in

Dark

Let it drip

Off of me in

Slow waves of

Molasses

Roll me over

Graves smelling

Of bogs and

Fireflies

Moths laced

In my hair and

Nibbling on my legs

Fly me to a

Treetop

And drop so I can

Stretch under freckled

Skies

With breath smelling of

Wings and

Caterpiller crawling

Sighs


Comments about Something Like Summer by Aria Siren

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (4/21/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    This piece demonstrates that a very few words can convey much when drawn by the right pen. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 128 Points Benjamin Michael Clark (4/9/2013 4:54:00 PM)

    Thank you for your comments. I really love this. Your line breaks and your choice of words. You really captured a moment with this poem. Bella! Amore! Volare! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,584 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/18/2013 5:56:00 AM)

    Lovely. I adore being part of the earth. I try to get outdoors as often as I can to poke around and explore the countryside. You have painted a mastepiece with very few brushstrokes. Wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/18/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    Very imaginative, a breath of summer in every word. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Titi Dale (3/16/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    Nice :) shot and simple lines that flow nicely on the tongue. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 16, 2013


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