Something Like Summer Poem by Aria Siren

Something Like Summer

Rating: 5.0


Take me

And let me hang

Loose

Dip me in

Dark

Let it drip

Off of me in

Slow waves of

Molasses

Roll me over

Graves smelling

Of bogs and

Fireflies

Moths laced

In my hair and

Nibbling on my legs

Fly me to a

Treetop

And drop so I can

Stretch under freckled

Skies

With breath smelling of

Wings and

Caterpiller crawling

Sighs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 21 April 2013

This piece demonstrates that a very few words can convey much when drawn by the right pen.

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R.benjamin Abate 09 April 2013

Thank you for your comments. I really love this. Your line breaks and your choice of words. You really captured a moment with this poem. Bella! Amore! Volare!

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Titi Dale 16 March 2013

Nice :) shot and simple lines that flow nicely on the tongue.

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