Some Of Them Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Some Of Them

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It is meeting of mind
And nature too if remains kind
The childhood friends turn permanent
They remain too closely relevant

The poor back ground helps a lot
The attention is never caught
When you have same status and standing
The families too have perfect understanding

Some of the friends had close affiliation
It was more than blood relation
They may visit home daily as members
They sometimes used to have dinner

We had no ill feeling
Near by pond provided perfect spot for swimming
We all naughty brigade used to stay there
Swim across and come back without fear

I used to think many times
What was factor behind innocent games?
I loved their participation
The close bond was real base for relation

Even though some of them are dead
I really miss their absence and read
They come in dream sometimes and speak
It helped me to become strong instead of going weak

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

It is meeting of mind And nature too if remains kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

family fun Tarijeana Labrecque21 minutes ago Family togetherness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

excellent! ¬ Daniel Acorn21 minutes ago Brill! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

Very good Melissa Vigna21 minutes ago Pulled me in and held my attention, a great write and an excellent read, thank you for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

welcome shujat ahmed 14 secs · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

We have many such family members, it is indeed a wonderful part of life! 1 hour ago by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi U swim? 1 hr · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome rohani daud 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

AWWW Piusha Singh15 minutes ago Childhood is a treasure and the friends you get will be forever.Love this and my heart got heavy as I read down.Great write, Hasmukh ji. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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