Sombre Days Poem by Ernestine Northover

Sombre Days

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Life can hit you right between the eyes,
Knocking you back, so you must start again,
From the beginning one must bravely rise,
And try to see the sunshine through the rain.

The wind that blows nobody any good,
Is buffeting me, so I no longer think
In a coherent way, it's like a hood
Thrown over my weary head, and so I sink.

Why do we have to bear these sombre days
Of sorrow, one needs happiness and peace;
We suffer hurt in many tragic ways,
And clamour for some measure of release.

When one has lost someone so very dear,
It's hard to face the world with confidence,
But one thing stands out very sharp and clear,
So painful is the final severance.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 30 November 2006

Ernestine, you express your feelings so directly and piognantly in this thoughtful piece. The word sombre is a good one to describe that 'painful, final severance'. We are thinking of you at this difficult time. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Kristin Davis 30 November 2006

Ernestistine darlin', I love you... I feel it too...through you and I raise my hands up RIGHT now for you are in my sincere thoughts and loudest prayers! If you ever need me, I'm here. I love you sis, and even though I'm goin' through what I'm fixinta have to face... YOU'RE ON MY MIND and IN MY HEART! Beautifully written with heartfrelt expression... Open your hand and spread your fingers darlin', .... see the spaces... right there is where MY fingers lay... Now make a fist and put your fist up to your heart.... THAT's where my love is! RIGHT THERE! Love~N~Honor, Kristin!

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Duncan Wyllie 01 December 2006

Strength is something that you hold near Ernestine, When times seem too much to bare you always seem to rise again, whether that be through your words or your actions Come on girl, head up, straight back, walk tall, be strong..you know you can Love duncan XXX

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Daniel Tyler 01 December 2006

We suffer hurt in many tragic ways, And clamour for some measure of release. It's such a good poem that I found it hard to pick my favourite lines but here they are. Wonderful writing, Ernestine.

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 30 November 2006

Powerful and soulfelt... a wonderful write Ernestine Best CJ

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Donna Nimmo 30 November 2006

A very moving poem and i know how you feel. Life can be so cruel. Sincerely, Donna

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Geoff Warden 30 November 2006

Ernestine, what an absolutally touching read, and in truth you are not alone, sharing in the emotional message bravely written by your heart has shawn a lite in my own personnal delema, and the strangth of your words, has truely blessed my heart..........

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