Solitary Confinement Poem by Ameer Mcarthur

goood meaningful poem...enjoyed..keep going

Hi Ameer. very strong for your first peice well put together with a powerful message plain to see. well worthy of a 10 Regards Dave T.

Sabash! (well done) i enjoyed reading this poem. a very good poem. keep writing.

Pretty deep... thought provoking... great, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

Well written. Enjoyed it.

nice work it has a power to convey the message of love and loving.

dear ameer, the poem doesn't complicate enough to develop as an independent statement of art or lamentation............!

The title is clever and the thoughts are strong. I confess modern style is not my cup of tea - my head is still buried in the works of older poets, as you can probably tell from my work. As a start it certainly has strength and character, I wish you every success with it, and all those that follow. Patrick

this s a nice one...its not the length of the poem that counts but the meaning...ths is a good start for a promising poems... CHEERS...

A wonderful start. In a little amount of words u seemed to have poured out ur feelings into this poem. It gives of a pretty clear image of what ur trying to say. Excellent piece....Keep writing: -)