Solace Quantum Poem by Rachel Butler

Solace Quantum

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(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)

He holds profound
the password of my secret,
in his heart.

Says, her.
Says, she,
says, me.

Say, I.
Say, I,
say, I.

Cad!

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,deceit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 08 November 2015

The unknown gardener is a key figure in the poem. He knows her secret (love?) , but she, and others, think he is a cad. M.Walker.

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Hans Vr 06 November 2015

While trying to solve the riddle of the password of the sparrow, a thought of unity of everyone and all things of the world appeared in my mind. The gardener may have have physical relationships with her and she but the beauty of the sparrow will always entice his heart and he will invariably interrupt his work to adore for a while the lovely sparrow. CAD. Wonderful, thought provoking. Quite sure that this is not the answer to the riddle but that was what I felt reading the poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

Password of secret is love within heart that each beat speaks and the solace quantum is counted many times in saying of cad sparrow. Very wisely expressed and this is interestingly humorous. Wisely said the secrete of love. A passionate poem shared....10

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Anita Sharma 05 November 2015

the password of my secret, in his heart, , , PASSION RESTORED, LIKED KEEP WRITING

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