Carey York

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Soft Whisper Poem by Carey York


I was loney and scared,
Believed that no one cared,
Lost in this big world you see,
And no one ever looking for me,
My heart was broke,
And everyone thought it was a joke,
I was lost in my own sorrow,
Hoping for a brighter tomorrow,

There was a whisper in my ear,
That said I am here,
For I never left you alone,
It was me that has kept you strong,
You are my child and I love you,
I will forever see you thru,

For so many years,
I shed a lot of tears,
But it all disappeared,
When I heard the soft whisper in my ear.

Submitted: Monday, September 12, 2011
Edited: Friday, October 07, 2011

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,848 Points Susan Williams (10/26/2014 1:11:00 PM)

    Yes! I love this poem's simplicity in its word choice and structure. Simplicity is powerful and its beauty is graceful. Excellent writing here. Perhaps the Holy Spirit was whispering in your ear as you put pen to paper here. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/26/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    What a great poem! The whisper is from God through the Holy spirit. Thank God for still gentle voice. More whispering in Jesus name (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 649 Points Alem Hailu G/kristos (10/26/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    What a poem! I liked it very much.It has message and music.I wish we were friends (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,272 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (10/26/2014 12:58:00 AM)

    It is so inspiring and beautiful, has already started kicking inside me. Thanks very much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,154 Points Tiku . (10/26/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Yeah He is always there to take care.Nice drop.Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,445 Points Soumita Sarkar (10/26/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Good.............light of Hope can make life new..............I invite you to read my poems.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,147 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/26/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    whisper in my ears, good one, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 866 Points Liliana ~el (10/26/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Tear-invoking; indeed filled with sorrow and a guardian angel to lift the heaviness to achieve airy peace
    Absolutely lovely! :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 974 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (10/26/2013 1:39:00 AM)

    Yes, God is always there for us and we are reminded of this only when hard times come...think of God in good times too, as our Saint Kabir says. Congrats on being poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Lenny Camacho (10/26/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    so sad and yet beautiful, so hopeful in the end (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Dilworth (10/26/2012 7:53:00 PM)

    Liked the poem.Very beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dominic Llewellyn (10/26/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    great poem. i liked the last stanza, especially the last line When I heard the soft whisper in my ear. nice rhyme scheme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/26/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    Nice write Cary, inspiring to read, nicely composed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (10/26/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/26/2012 1:13:00 AM)

    Only the deep call on the deep. God speaks in small still voice. The only problem is that we sedomly listen. Thank God you heard well when He spoke. Keep getting closer to Him. Good poem. I give 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/12/2011 8:51:00 PM)

    That soft voice you heard was definitely God looking after you! Well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poetic talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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