Soft Whisper Poem by Carey York

Soft Whisper

Rating: 4.5


I was loney and scared,
Believed that no one cared,
Lost in this big world you see,
And no one ever looking for me,
My heart was broke,
And everyone thought it was a joke,
I was lost in my own sorrow,
Hoping for a brighter tomorrow,

There was a whisper in my ear,
That said I am here,
For I never left you alone,
It was me that has kept you strong,
You are my child and I love you,
I will forever see you thru,

For so many years,
I shed a lot of tears,
But it all disappeared,
When I heard the soft whisper in my ear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soumita Sarkar 26 October 2013

Good.............light of Hope can make life new..............I invite you to read my poems.Thanks.

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Romeo Della Valle 12 September 2011

That soft voice you heard was definitely God looking after you! Well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your poetic talented writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2012

Only the deep call on the deep. God speaks in small still voice. The only problem is that we sedomly listen. Thank God you heard well when He spoke. Keep getting closer to Him. Good poem. I give 10/10

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 October 2012

THIS POEM IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKED IT. I LOVE THE TITTLE TOO: SOFT WHISPER.

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Susan Williams 26 October 2014

Yes! I love this poem's simplicity in its word choice and structure. Simplicity is powerful and its beauty is graceful. Excellent writing here. Perhaps the Holy Spirit was whispering in your ear as you put pen to paper here.

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Babatunde Aremu 26 October 2014

What a great poem! The whisper is from God through the Holy spirit. Thank God for still gentle voice. More whispering in Jesus name

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 26 October 2014

What a poem! I liked it very much.It has message and music.I wish we were friends

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 October 2014

It is so inspiring and beautiful, has already started kicking inside me. Thanks very much for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2013

Yeah He is always there to take care.Nice drop.Liked it.

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