Soft Life Poem by kente lucy

Soft Life

Rating: 5.0


So soft and fragile is a woman's life
delicate like a rose's petals
that if trampled on, they die never to
come back to life.

Breakable like an egg is her life
that she has to be handled with gentility
to keep her glowing and youthful.

Graceful in character, like a giraffe walking
with her long crested neck,
Her heart full of compassion and love,

She delights in no pain, sorrow nor suffering
she hates wars, quarrels and disunity
all her efforts a directed to one;
A united family, united country, united world
Mother nature is what she is!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 30 June 2011

very tender and focused lines.... beautiful :) sat

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Ramesh Kavdia 30 June 2011

so graceful poem about the real woman.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill. The poem is highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Warmest regards Akmal

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