So What! Poem by Lyn Paul

So What!

Rating: 5.0


There is always one
One Loser
We Can't all win
No Matter
What
You Have put in
So What
This world
Is a struggle
For Us all
At some point
It's the lessons
You learn
What you do with it
Is your choice
So what
Yes
It hurts
But
There are others hurting
So much harder
Yet sometimes
Those seeing wrong
Are those doing wrong
But.... So What... Just survive
Theres no.. other way
In time
They will see
Bad choices.... they have made
So What
Don't give in
You have not done wrong
Some need the power
Others just need to believe

But Hey
So what.....
You just have to survive!
And..... YOU can




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Wednesday, October 2, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,greed,hope,loss,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all know.... Every cloud has a silver lining.... NO Matter What!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 October 2013

very inspiring, Lyn, this poem reinforces the strength to survive.

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Nader Baheri 05 October 2013

i like the bitter theme flows in this poem.i add nobody wins, everybody is losing.but as u ve said struggling for it is continuing.~nb

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

I am have the dark cloud...no silver lining for me.....but i having golden lining with thundering shine inside..grrrrmmmm_Soul

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Kanav Justa 13 November 2013

A great message you gave.... nicee

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A nice discussion with the current happenings concluding - - survival for fittest.

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Valsa George 09 October 2013

We cannot expect victory all the time! Failures and enemity from others also are sure to occur in life! Those who learn lessons from adversities and train themselves to ignore negative elements in life are sure to succeed! ! An inspiring write, Lyn! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 October 2013

Those seeing wrong Are those doing wrong Lof of times we see evil and ignore. No action taken it keeps rising. Beautiful poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 October 2013

Aha nice motivational inspirational poem ful of hope. Gud job poetess

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