So Sad Poem by Veruschka Nicole Eiman

So Sad

Rating: 5.0


As I sit in this dark room
I hear a loud sound boom, boom, boom
But then I realized it was the heartbeat of my heart
Tears rolling down my cheeks
as a stream
Finding it hard to accept we're so far apart
I don't know if you are dead or alive
Am trying to survive
But the thought of having no dad
is getting to me
I don't know I have to be mad or sad
I find myself alone in this world
I see my friends hugging their daddies
And then realize I don't have one
But I guess the damage is already done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nangula Immanuel 27 April 2009

Hey! This is such a powerful poem. So sad! I think that perhaps you could read one of mine, it's titled 'you weren't there' It was one that i wrote to my dad(he died when i was younger) and i think maybe it might help you see things in a different light. Wish you all the best! ! Nangula

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James Nall 04 April 2009

10+. So much pain from one so young, I looked for Love Hurts and alas, not listed.This is an excellent write. unfortunately, your able to show your emotions so well in verse, because of what you have suffered. I am sorry that you have had to go through such heartbreak. writing is my form of therapy, too. keep writing and don't keep these feelings bottled up, because it will cause you even more problems, if you do.thanx for sharing

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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

O it is life...... so sweet and so harsh take care

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