So Low Poem by Jessica Stubbs

So Low

Rating: 4.5


I don't know how to be happy
I don't know how to keep myself laughing
I can't fake a smile
I can't act like I feel alive

The days and nights are entwined
I've got bad thoughts in my mind
I can't rest
Not when my head's a mess

How long can I keep this up
Holding back all the pain when it's about to erupt
Not really showing how bad I'm suffering
Not really showing how bad life stings

I don't know, maybe I don't want to hold on
Maybe I'm not strong
Maybe It's time to go
God, I feel so low

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

Sometimes this kind of 'feeling low' feelings surround all aspects of life, particularly in the adolescent period, but one must not succumb to the pressures of negativity. One must try to bear with the bad time with patience. Life goes on...so will you.

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