So Long Poem by Indira Renganathan

So Long

Rating: 5.0


I never dreamt of a characteristic wind
Knocking into my ear-drum to tear it
The first tread soothing it was
Next it tickled following to hit me
Down to be trampled by a rolling rock

Already quivering in the cold,
Fluttering still more the chill wind,
I kept trembling unable to foot on
Caught up midway, far from home
Became a driven orphan.
But
Home- inflated with mounted chilliness
Aerated with freezing coldness
Iciness always welcomed to threaten
Me to be murdered awfully to death

Finding no difference I decided to die
That spot promising to get acclimatized
Sometime somehow in my next birth
Friendly with this 'freez'y'-land'
So long with sobs and sighs good-bye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 July 2018

I never dreamt of a characteristic wind.....I am back to action! A beautiful poem dear madam...10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

I never dreamt of a characteristic wind Knocking into my ear-drum to tear it...beautiful expression! A beautiful poem dear madam! I wanted to send a message to you but you have disabled it! Let me pass this message here that I was planning to quit PH but made up my mind to continue! However, I will operate it in low key as per my convenience! Stay always blessed dear madam!

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