So Different Poem by Mark Normand

So Different

Rating: 5.0


Put on my shoes and walk with me into
my world of sorrows.
My endless state of loneliness, cold pain,
and lost tomorrows.
The days and nights continue on, the
battle never ends.
The heartbreak from cruel women, and
the hatred from all men.
To be one who is different, a square peg
in a round hole.
To be sane among insanity, shouting truth
as hatred grows.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 26 August 2012

Hold on to your sanity. Don’t be discouraged, Mark, thinking you’re some square. You’re not. Simply put, you are unique - beautiful and special in the eyes of God. In this piece, you’ve done a great job in expressing yourself with imagery, befitting to portray your deep sentiments.

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Adeline Foster 06 August 2012

Again, why the reference to agedness? You have hardly reached there yet, believe me. And why the double spacing? It is well done though. Adeline

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Sara Hosseini 19 July 2012

That was so moving Mark! I really liked it

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