So Close Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

So Close

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It is such feeling
That sends you flying
With all that you can
Even chase behind as mad fan

Nothing so special
Yet big deal
Mind at unrest
Heart at its best

I dream and remember
But she fails to offer
And draw me near
I always think but inwardly fear

She is nobody
Yet somebody
My crown and queen
Always adored and seen

Her cheeks glow
With wind's blow
I think of her patience
But wait for no chance

I slowly whisper
For a response form her
She is always there
And so close to be near

Wednesday, June 11, 2014
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NICE Sheela Devi4 hours ago Touching

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i like it Helen Setta 4 hours ago I dream and remember... Comment +1

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very beautiful and unexpected. Linda Bycoskie4 hours ago interesting writing. Comment +1

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JayLou Santos Ooohhh....am crying...YOu touched my Soul....yOur Awesome....Hugsss ** my Friend.... 3 hrs · Unlike · 1 3 hrs · Like

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Sachin Sachin nice sir 3 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Like it very much :) 11 Jun by Lena LeFay to So close

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Like. :) 11 Jun by Mr. Frivolous to So close

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Shujat Ahmad and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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