So Carry On Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

So Carry On



No reaction
For people's action
As they may offer
With ach point to differ

It is crowd
Where everybody speaks loud
Tries to be heard with voice
With false or true promise

But people know it is all hollow
Let that blow
In any direction
It needs no reaction

Good work always speaks
And slowly spreads
Across the people around
To look convincingly sound

So carry on to bring
With mighty wings
A desirous change
With agreeable passage

Thursday, September 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

Carry on.... with the good work...... Donut Girl21 minutes ago Regardless :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

It was alright. Molly Breese24 minutes ago The wording seemed a bit off to me in a couple passages (such as It is crowd in passage two) . Otherwise the poem was well written, with a good topic.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

welcome shujat ahmed Just now · Edited · Unlike · 1 today by

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

Shujat Ahmad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

No reaction For people’s action

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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