Snowflakes And Petals (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Snowflakes And Petals (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


the snow-carpet fades
specks on verdure—Spring's snowdrops
snowing petals soon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 30 October 2014

Nice poem.... well done

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Daniel Brick 24 October 2014

This is just lovely and not a shadow in view to spoil the delicate perception. This haiku and the previous tanka belong together. The haiku is innocent. It only knows what it loves and it loves in an extended present moment. The tanks is wise, it knows life is brief and we need a philosophy to reconcile ourselves to transience. It's amazing. You wrote two short poems and together they encompass the world and the fullness of heart that makes us human.

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Anthony Burkett 18 October 2014

Simply beautiful... you genuinely honor the genre.

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Mark Heathcote 18 October 2014

A beautiful haiku and very nicely, written.

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