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(May 27,1952 / Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

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Snowflakes

A chilly blast of air rushes through the trees
They begin to sway to and fro as if in a trance
The skies change from clear blue to a misty gray
Cool air began to rise and then it began to snow

Winter begins to show its magnificent wonders
As the cold rain turns to brilliant snowflakes
Gently falls to the ground with sparkling majesty
Blanketing the earth like a sea of white glass

Falling to the earth twinkling like crystal stars
Fleeing as the sun peeps out of its hiding place
Melting each snowflake thats unique in every way
Just like a shining jewel fading into the sunlight

Then cleanses the earth with a burst of fresh air
So that the atmosphere will be refreshed and renewed
To be enjoyed and appreciated by every living thing
Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God

Submitted: Tuesday, May 28, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 05, 2013


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  • Beach Girl (9/19/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    You paint quite a vivid picture with exquisite words. Love this poem. Gave it a 10

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  • Noreen Carden (9/14/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate
    well written

  • Noreen Carden (9/14/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate
    well written

  • Theodora Onken (9/6/2013 11:00:00 AM)

    This is so very beautiful. From start to finish - and much appreciated as it cooled me down, literally. We are experiencing 100 and above temps here, this day.

  • Elena Sandu (8/20/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    All the pressure gained from an unusual summer heat is soothed away with this poem, I love it, thank you for share!

  • Ramesh Rai (8/2/2013 5:20:00 PM)

    a very imaginative and descriptive write on changing face of nature. it is also made clear that the changes bring refeshness n this nature with our life is renewed. i love the style of writing and choosing common words enabling the common readers to read n understand. a complete poem crafted with high skill n beautiful metaphores. thanks for sharing.
    with regards

  • Adeline Foster (7/14/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    A lovely, enjoyable poem. read mine - Wide Open Spaces -
    Adeline

  • Diane Hine (6/22/2013 10:15:00 PM)

    A lovely image of crystal stars fleeing as the sun peeps out of its hiding place. Enjoyable poem.

  • Heather Wilkins (6/12/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    a beautiful winter scene.

  • Bobby Wynn (6/11/2013 6:00:00 PM)

    Another great one, what are we going to do with you

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