Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 4,662 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Snowflakes - Poem by Patricia Grantham

A chilly blast of air rushes through the trees
They begin to sway to and fro as if in a trance
The skies change from clear blue to a misty gray
Cool air began to rise and then it began to snow

Winter begins to show its magnificent wonders
As the cold rain turns to brilliant snowflakes
Gently falls to the ground with sparkling majesty
Blanketing the earth like a sea of white glass

Falling to the earth twinkling like crystal stars
Fleeing as the sun peeps out of its hiding place
Melting each snowflake thats unique in every way
Just like a shining jewel fading into the sunlight

Then cleanses the earth with a burst of fresh air
So that the atmosphere will be refreshed and renewed
To be enjoyed and appreciated by every living thing
Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God


Comments about Snowflakes by Patricia Grantham

  • Rookie - 341 Points Beach Girl (9/19/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    You paint quite a vivid picture with exquisite words. Love this poem. Gave it a 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,844 Points Noreen Carden (9/14/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate
    well written (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,844 Points Noreen Carden (9/14/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    This is a lovely description of all the wonderful changes that we experience in winter but dont always appreciate
    well written (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 749 Points Theodora Onken (9/6/2013 11:00:00 AM)

    This is so very beautiful. From start to finish - and much appreciated as it cooled me down, literally. We are experiencing 100 and above temps here, this day. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,955 Points Elena Sandu (8/20/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    All the pressure gained from an unusual summer heat is soothed away with this poem, I love it, thank you for share! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,771 Points Ramesh Rai (8/2/2013 5:20:00 PM)

    a very imaginative and descriptive write on changing face of nature. it is also made clear that the changes bring refeshness n this nature with our life is renewed. i love the style of writing and choosing common words enabling the common readers to read n understand. a complete poem crafted with high skill n beautiful metaphores. thanks for sharing.
    with regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 491 Points Adeline Foster (7/14/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    A lovely, enjoyable poem. read mine - Wide Open Spaces -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (6/22/2013 10:15:00 PM)

    A lovely image of crystal stars fleeing as the sun peeps out of its hiding place. Enjoyable poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/12/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    a beautiful winter scene. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/11/2013 6:00:00 PM)

    Another great one, what are we going to do with you (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,637 Points Ken E Hall (6/10/2013 7:53:00 AM)

    a breath of fresh air this poem on snowflakes with the feeling of the cold around you not much snow in OZ, very nice to read...frozen tears...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,160 Points Valsa George (6/8/2013 11:17:00 PM)

    You have beautifully portrayed the changing face of Nature with her rotating cycle of seasons! Even the dull winter is made beautiful by your lovely imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (6/6/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    Wonderful word-picture.You have taken me there.Fell like frozen tears then warmed by the hands of God- - -terrific line.Amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 803 Points Louis Rams (5/31/2013 8:50:00 PM)

    a beautiful description of the winter snows (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,711 Points Valerie Dohren (5/31/2013 4:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem Patricia, some lovely lines and very imaginative. A great read. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,500 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/29/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    Lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,833 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/28/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    Snow flakes are beautiful. Frozen tears warmed by God. Nicely expressed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 5, 2013


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