Snow Poem by sekharan pookkat

Snow

Rating: 5.0


Snow is white
White is pure
Pure as milk
Milk to serve.

Serve so sweet
Sweet to serve
Serve to sail
Sail to set.

Set to hard
Hard as ice
Ice is cold
Cold as snow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2018

Set to hard Hard as ice Ice is cold Cold as snow......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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sekharan Pookkat 15 October 2018

thaanks for your feedback sir

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 01 January 2014

OK, we have white, sweet and cold. White is impatience, sweet, we would like to have the sweets of life and cold is when we get hurt once, we never forget.

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