Snatching Solitude Poem by Anita Atina

Snatching Solitude

Rating: 5.0


Snatching solitude from sleep
For a few wakeful hours, to reclaim myself
From the web of relationships that define us
And the responsibilities that dictate our days

Now that isn’t such a wise thing!
Doctors often say, while they tend to the heart
As an organ, rarely seeing the soul
That needs mending too

But now that stillness overcomes hurtling day
I tend to my temple
That stands with windows open
Welcoming new winds from o’er the land

That quiet corner is my favourite place
Where a candle glows, softly
Lighting up dark corners, and freeing my spirit
To commune with the vastness beyond

Sometimes a quiet whisper holds clues
To a story yet to unfold, while at others
The quiet holds me in a warm embrace
While I snatch solitude from sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Blanch 08 February 2009

A splendidly comforting piece which buiuld up to a concluding stanza whose repeated soft s sounds sound (paradoxically) like the silence which speaks soft words. A very warming embrace. Thanks.

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Fiona Davidson 29 January 2009

Good write Anita...thank you.....

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