Smudge Of Blood Poem by Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil

Smudge Of Blood

Rating: 4.7


Here, this smudge of blood,
Of a tender boy of eleven,
Soaked thru the tarmac,
Yet to be dried, still wet and warm!

An innocent young lad,
Fades-in my mind,
Your bag! Your bag!
Picking up a shopping bag,
Shouting and chasing the biker,
Who slings the bag into the crowd,
And cruises at a high speed.
Shouting repeatedly in vain,
Albeit he ran a bit far away from the crowd,
Your Bag! Your Bag!
Still shouting...

Oh! Sudden, the shopping bag explodes
Shredding in to pieces, the poor boy.
Scattering around his fresh flesh all over.
"My son! " "My son! "
The horror stricken mother gasps.
Dreadfully aloud and running to the spot,
Where her son has been ripped,
Plight of the mother is tearful.
Compassions and rancours surge up,
Cries and sighs of the shocked crowd, aghast.
Mother out of sense of mind,
Insanely hasten gathering,
Of her only beloved son's tender bod.
Warm blood dripping fleshes, broken skul,
Clasping to her bosom
"Oh! My Son, My Son. '
Weeping and wailing with a grief uncontrollable,
Caving into the pool of blood…sans...consciousness. ……………………………………………………
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Appalling brutality and the terror,
Of evil minds, will get over when?
Open your eyes, empathize,
NO reward of Heaven, for shedding the innocent blood.
NO reward of Heaven, for this distress of mothers.
What remains is just this smudge of blood…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johnathan Juarez 16 May 2012

really good grasp on the story

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Jeska bella 21 March 2012

hay nice can you read and coment on mine plz thanks jeska

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Really it's a touching one. blood steaming lines............wonderful, Nooredeen ji.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 17 February 2011

Really great writing that i could visualise. heart sinks into sadness. poignant act of indignant minds. Read my poems also and post comments. .

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Stephen Gregory 21 February 2011

Nooruddeen, Read your poem and believed every dripping word!

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 January 2021

Terrorism despised

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Farisa Haleel 04 May 2016

Nice way of presentation and choosing of words made this poem perfect...and touched my heart....

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Elisha Wall 20 January 2015

Looking at the evil heart of men and the work of their cruelty! My heart weeps for the mother of the child. Thanks for sharing this tragic poem. Not only do we as poets share the good times and the beautiful moments, but sad times as this.

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Vishal Sharma 09 July 2013

most commented poem on poemhunter i think

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 11 June 2012

the situation is entirely written with profound of quest - thought of slaughtering the innocent for reaping crooked desires by the sloths in dark side of the world......the content holds true emotions along with the mode of words.

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