Smitten Poem by Bull Hawking

Smitten

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I'm bringing you the best
Only the best is for you
I love to love and laugh and jest
From dawn till night is kazoo
I come with a take on taking you
Inflamed with voracious tenderness
Man of velvet man of steel
with the metrics of tickling feet
In a storm
What's there to do in Aruba
but rub the wind in your hair
And to watch how the sand
Waits for the sea
to see how the sun
paints the afternoon shore
And be sure that I'm shoring for you

Saturday, December 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: afterlife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bull Hawking 14 December 2014

Thanks Mandolin for the suggestions.....and the....all caps for sure. One error crept into my ending when I retyped it.....the word shoring....should be....shorn....because it was a veiled reference to Samson & Delilah....after his hair was cut off....it is one of the saddest love stories ever told....he was betrayed when he trusted her most....it cost him everything.

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