Smiling Stars Poem by sekharan pookkat

Smiling Stars

Rating: 5.0


Roll me up and roll me down
And windup the real life
Tug me in the pool of sins
To see the eternal world
Put me in the swing
In which I am sinking
Between life and death
And relieve me from pain.


Darkness covers my eyes
And burnt out the beacons
With wonderful colors
Of life this filled up.
Pain slashes my cells
Live scrolling away from me
Still I see the world smiling
Like the stars shining in the sky.

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was in bed suffering from severe pain on my both knee
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 04 September 2016

I love this superb write the imagery is so striking with great choice of words and a stunning ending!

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Neela Nath Das 03 January 2015

This is called Art of Living.To extract positive energy from Negative thing is the sign of good soul.A fantastic poem.

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