Small Flat Poem by David Darbyshire

Small Flat

Rating: 5.0


It could be good possible,
that you have a small flat.
It's probably mission Impossible
To lay down your Hat.

Now your flat maybe tiny,
such a small shack.
That the mice,
have a hunch on their back

Try not to dwell
small can be cozy
things look swell,
all will be rosie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Forever 18 July 2006

Its not the size that matters...its who dwells in it..and what you make out of it. Hunchback mice may look cute too: -)

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Lynda Robson 18 July 2006

Small and bijou Dave ha ha, my bungalow is heaving at the moment, funny as usual Love Lynda xxx

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Francesca Johnson 18 July 2006

Hey, everyone seems to be positive and happy today. Could it be the sunshine? I like the bit about the mice having hunchbacks. Brought a bigger smile to my already smiling face. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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