! ! ! ! Slipping Back! ! ! ! ! Poem by Kieran J1996

! ! ! ! Slipping Back! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.4


I'm slipping back,
Into the madness of the night,
Where only thoughts,
Of death can reach me,
Despair claims all,
So why not me,
I'm worthless,
No meaning to my life,
Everything I touch,
Withers and dies,
I am cursed,
To forever walk alone,
Despairing,
What else could it be,
I'm slipping back,
Falling backwards,
Into my darkest nightmare,
That is truly named,
Denial,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Søren Valentine 20 May 2013

So, my initial thought was that this was a little melodramtic. Then I realized the emotion and it came alive to me because I've been here myself. I love how the last line summarizes things up.... Denial. Beautiful! Good job mate!

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Laron Green Sr. 05 February 2012

nice poem and it do have a meaning

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Kevin Carney 30 July 2010

Such a sad poem. Its such a statement on tortured emmotion. Very well written been there also.

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

This poem is very intense. The 'i am cursed' part makes me a little bit sad, because no one is cursed. but from the poem and the other comment seems like we all have something in common, no matter where i guess. Solid stuff.

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Tamika Tucker 28 July 2010

awwww, that is really sad. i have felt like that before!

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