Slippery Ground Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Slippery Ground

Rating: 5.0


Heavy showers make land surface slippery,
Cautious walk with alertness and worry,
Sudden fall causes injury and makes you sorry,
While Children play in street and make it marry,

We tend to forget soon the impact of ground,
Not heeding to advice even looks sound,
In heavy rain you should avoid drive and round,
Such joy and happiness may always be not found,

Life is such thrilling and so exciting,
Lovely butterflies around make it inviting,
Youngsters go for side track and easy walk,
Wearing rosy smile and romantic talk,

Life is more or less on slippery track,
Relation may grow fast and develop crack,
Easy joy sometimes lands you in trouble,
Love disappears fast as water bubble,

As rain appeals you to go for easy ride,
Romantic mood may appear which no one should hide,
Friends sometimes open up and freely confide,
Beautiful scenes can be pictures and taken in slide,

We may call it love or mere infatuation,
Momentary burst of laughter with little fluctuation,
Serious relations may not develop and out of question,
Going for ride is only for pleasure and not for attraction,

It looks easy and but still very hard way,
Further relations may grow and have its say,
Some relations may also progress and some turn sour,
It may come as rain with more water to pour,

We may tend to caution but definitely slip,
Strong urge may prevent no more fall or skip,
One may go for kill but in turn gets killed,
Finds only sorrows and joy never filled,

Both grounds are same and to be dealt with caution
Whoever comes out of it may not face question
You may feel so as if come out of cage
Certainly it is matter incase of age.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pittle Shaileja 26 July 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry, very good poem...10

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 27 July 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry, Sudden fall injures and makes you sorry, Children play in street and make it marry, rainy season is compared with young age...one should be careful...10

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Ritul Soni 30 July 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry, oneshould be careful on ground...10

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Ratna Patel 02 August 2009

Life is also such thrilling and exciting, Lovely butterflies make it more inviting, ..it is slippery too...10

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Ketan Rajgor 02 August 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery..make the ground slippery...10

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G Kandoi 16 November 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry,

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Severina Dsouza 17 October 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry, Sudden fall injures and makes you sorry

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Sergio Bruno 26 September 2009

Life more or less is slippery track, Relations grow and develop crack, Easy joy sometimes lands to trouble, Love disappears as water bubble

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Suresh Vakil 18 September 2009

Heavy showers make land surface slippery, Cautious walk with alertness and worry,

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Chaul Vania 15 August 2009

take precaution always...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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