Slip..... Poem by Valerie Dohren

Slip.....

Rating: 5.0


Slip into my fantasy
Walk into my dream
Clasp my hand in paradise
‘Neath a soft sunbeam

Touch me as a summer breeze
Gentle on my face
Keep me close against your heart
Warm in your embrace

Slide into my memory
So I’ll ne’er forget
Linger there within my mind
That I shall not fret

Step into my glist’ning eyes
Greet me with your smile
Feel my gaze upon your face
Tarry there awhile

Hold onto my shadow cast
Never set me free
Wrap me in your tender love
Through eternity

Journey deep into my soul
Find the love that’s there
Joined together, two as one
All our life to share

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 April 2013

Very warm and passionate! ! Two souls conjoined as one all through eternity! Wonderful! !

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David Wood 11 April 2013

Your poems are silky smoot. You really are a great poet

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Lyn Paul 12 April 2013

What beautiful words. I particularly like verse 5, words that so many need. Great job Val. Kevin's message made me laugh.

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Dave Walker 12 April 2013

A beautiful poem, the first stanza sets it up beautifully.

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Om Chawla 13 April 2013

A very lovely poem, fantasizing passionate yearning. I find it difficult to single out any particular stanza for praise as whole poem is, as it were, carved out of a single stone much like lovely figures of Ajanta Caves.

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Aria Siren 28 May 2013

From what I gather, your style is soft like opaque sunbeams and always carried in a tone of dignity. Beautiful

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John Brown 22 April 2013

Beautiful Val, as always.

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Hazel Durham 16 April 2013

Soothing, mellow and full of wonderful enchantment! Beautiful write!

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David Wood 16 April 2013

Another beautiful poem Valerie and a joy to read.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 16 April 2013

The tender love and the manner you have portrayed it with lovely rhyming scheme is greatly alluring, Valerie! KUDOS!

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