Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,678 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Slip..... - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Slip into my fantasy
Walk into my dream
Clasp my hand in paradise
‘Neath a soft sunbeam

Touch me as a summer breeze
Gentle on my face
Keep me close against your heart
Warm in your embrace

Slide into my memory
So I’ll ne’er forget
Linger there within my mind
That I shall not fret

Step into my glist’ning eyes
Greet me with your smile
Feel my gaze upon your face
Tarry there awhile

Hold onto my shadow cast
Never set me free
Wrap me in your tender love
Through eternity

Journey deep into my soul
Find the love that’s there
Joined together, two as one
All our life to share

Comments about Slip..... by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 36,605 Points * Sunprincess * (3/11/2014 3:10:00 PM) beautiful val, you have a wonderful grasp on love's essence...enjoyed this lovely piece... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aria Siren (5/28/2013 1:06:00 PM)

    From what I gather, your style is soft like opaque sunbeams and always carried in a tone of dignity. Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points John Brown (4/22/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful Val, as always. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,675 Points Hazel Durham (4/16/2013 5:40:00 PM)

    Soothing, mellow and full of wonderful enchantment!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (4/16/2013 4:49:00 AM)

    Another beautiful poem Valerie and a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/16/2013 2:48:00 AM)

    The tender love and the manner you have portrayed it with lovely rhyming scheme is greatly alluring, Valerie! KUDOS! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (4/15/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    a love and feeling i hope to share with someone special one day, a beautiful poem as always (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (4/14/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    So tender is love, so smooth are your diction. Like feathers they touch my soul! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 942 Points Mary Forrester (4/14/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful poem Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (4/13/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    You are the summer breeze that warm our smiles, a lovely write again for sure! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (4/13/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    As beautiful as a wave cresting on the ocean....
    wave after wave..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,570 Points Om Chawla (4/13/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    A very lovely poem, fantasizing passionate yearning.
    I find it difficult to single out any particular stanza for praise as whole poem is, as it were, carved out of a single stone much like lovely figures of Ajanta Caves. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (4/12/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, the first stanza sets it up beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (4/12/2013 8:30:00 AM)

    Simply gorgeous Val. A tender, gentle and deeply peaceful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,468 Points Lyn Paul (4/12/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    What beautiful words. I particularly like verse 5, words that so many need. Great job Val. Kevin's message made me laugh. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (4/11/2013 1:53:00 PM)

    Wow Val if I wore glasses they'd be steamed up.
    You must be reading Jackie Collins again!
    Nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (4/11/2013 12:14:00 PM)

    Your poems are silky smoot. You really are a great poet (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (4/11/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    Gorgeous Val and very skilfully done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (4/11/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Very warm and passionate! ! Two souls conjoined as one all through eternity! Wonderful! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,266 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/11/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    journey deep in to my soul. good one. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013

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