Sleep Poem by lingaya maya

Sleep

Rating: 5.0


sleep

even sleep
cannot close
my eyes
with lies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

powerful..awakening thought

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Ana Monnar 19 August 2007

Very clever write. : -)))))))))

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Shazaad Hosany 21 October 2007

Stunning lines. Hats off.

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Kelvin Karani 03 January 2010

sleep even sleep cannot close my eyes with lies.......... ................... 10+

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Indira Renganathan 25 August 2009

So let the lies rest in eternal sleep....nice read...thank you

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Kelvin Karani 06 August 2009

this great piece utilizes the absurd to get across. Many questions and their answers are left to the reader.

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Sylvi Sylva 02 January 2008

Great read and keep em coming, Jomo!

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Linda Weischedel 02 January 2008

Wicked poem, I like this one a lot Jomo!

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