Sky's Eyes(Haiku) Poem by Dr Hitesh Sheth

Sky's Eyes(Haiku)

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In blue skies
A twin flock of birds flies
the sky's eyes

Dr Hitesh C Sheth
09/07/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 09 July 2009

cute and well expressed........... just enjoyed.......

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Angelic Warrior 09 July 2009

i like haiku's......i like one :) ....its nice: D

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Rakesh Bedi 09 July 2009

Good haiku, Doc, well penned!

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Catrina Heart 09 July 2009

lovely haiku written..........

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 July 2009

a beautiful picture...! !

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Sonya Florentino 31 July 2009

what a beautiful vision... and I swear i did see it wink!

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 July 2009

well after a long time i m reading one of yours sir.. this must be the first Haiku i v read of yours.. and this is great three lines to sore mental hearts indeed.. thanks for the treatment.. with love shan

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Indira Renganathan 17 July 2009

Still more beautiful when the sky flutters its eyes......good sky-high

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lovely image of the birds there

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and i could se that eyes of the sky...beatiful image..

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