Sky's Beauty Poem by Michelle Kafka

Sun chases Moon around room Sun tenderly touches Moon's lips; a luminescent view beautiful poem with vision and i liked it most. it has clear insight and deserves...10 read mine dark clound.. cool breeze and colour

An admiring piece you have penned.

Thank you for your kind words and support. Actually this poem was inspired by an artist friend's artwork. Warm thanks to the artist - Brodi Surrealist! Thank you for the rating Hasmukh!

Pink Moon - astronomical , phenomenal Sun's shaft - exquisite and unhindered.........................oh what a kind of imagery on the etching face of florence, unleashing a matrix of dynamics that swoon mortality to prolong by exuberance lusciuos glow as when entwines in the night of hours unequaled, wrought ingenious across profoundity of ocean`s deep in metaphors,10+++++, thanks for sharing

I agree with Poet Louis Rams. Thanks for share

reality based idea and impressive style of writing..liked it 10/10

i see this in two different ways, and i'll explain. the first is all the beauties that the LORD has created for us to see, such as the sun, moon, wind, wolves. and there is nothing to compare to what he has given us. the second is a sexual stimulating scene between the sun and the moon in all their glory. e.g. suns shaft instead of suns rays. sun tenderly touches moons lips. so as i read this poem which you wrote so beautifully it carries me to both sides of the coin. a double ten for your pen.

You are a wonderful weaver of words and emotions which creates extaordinary images thank you for writing down the artists impressions as you have observed them I'm sure you give to each other because of your talents.

Exquisite and unhindered, thats what your poem is. Wonderful!